Thursday, 8 November 2012

Three Alternative Opening Sequences

Take One

Bill - Hey man

Ben - Safe man whats going on

Bill - Not alot man Im just chilling , Ive staretd a new project you should take a look at

Ben - Awesome

Moves from front door into the studio

Bill presses play on his project

Bill - Its pretty cool man , all the basics are there you just need to develop it

Ben - Yeah man . . . . yeah I do

Long pause

Bill - But we should definetly get our priorities right and get some doritos.

Ben - Damn right homeslice , damn right

They both leave to go to the shop

Take Two

Ben - Safe

Bill - Safe

Ben - Ive brought my laptop man , ive got a couple new tunes we can work on

Bill - Yeah me too man , weve got loads of work to do

Ben - Ive been speaking to Dave from UpInSmoke Records and he likes a couple of our tunes

Bill - Thats f#'#'#king sick man , so what happens now

Ben - Well we wait and see . . . but first . .

Bill - Pizza

Ben - Yes. Pizza

Take Three

Bill - WHATS POPPIN CRACKAAA

Ben - Whats GOOODDD WIGGGAAA

Bill - Im not coming in man , in need to buy some baccy and doritos first are you coming ?

Ben - Two seconds man lemme get my coat

Bill - I love doritos . .

Ben - Me too man

Bill - This one time , I ate lots of them

Ben - NO WAY I did that too !!!

Bill - Right on homie . . right on . . .

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Im going to go with the third opening because I feel that it captures the teenage humour that I'm going with and really gives you an idea what the characters are like in very few words.

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