This is the feedback I got for my Unedited version of my Radio drama
What drops on the floor ? Big bump (Rizzla)
Sound effects
Cut out giggling
Mary jane/cuts in too quickly
Need a doorbell for Domino pizza
+ door opening/closing
The simplicity made it easy to listen to
The general opinion was that it was funny
Add in fades for scene changes
All of these problems have been taken out of my final edit
their are loads of different sound effects , lots of careful editing
of various different audio files and rerecorded dialouge in certain places
